雅思大作文范文三篇 雅思大作文这样收尾，作文想不拿7+都难(4)

参考范文结尾段：

In conclusion, far from having no connection to our survival, wild animals are the very precondition for our existence on this planet. We certainly need to take care of our own problems, yet if all wild animals perish, we human beings will perish as well.

这个话题需要学生分析要不要花钱保护野生动物。雅思考试不需要考生提出惊世骇俗的三观，学生的基本观点大多为野生动物值得花钱去保护。在结尾第一句提出观点之后，第二句就从人类存亡的方面，给出了自己的预期。建议或展望，属于考生相对比较拿手的思维套路，尤其对于写作思路还比较欠缺的同学有较强的可操作性。

除了以上三种段落思维结构策略，还有一个建议是在结尾段使用一定的特殊句型，人为的制造一个“高潮”，给考官制造小惊喜，提升他对考生作文所使用技巧的上限。当然，前提时所使用的句型熟练掌握，不然，惊喜变成惊吓，就得不偿失了。

例如，剑11第3套题话题：

in general a mutex object with an unspecified locking strategy is unsafe, and it requires programmer discipline to use the mutex object properly. however, this strategy allows an implementation to be as fast as possible with no restrictions on its implementation. this is especially true for portable implementations that wrap the native threading support of a platform. for this reason, the classesboost::mutex, boost::try_mutex and boost::timed_mutex use this locking strategy despite the lack of safety.。ets对托福考试的定义：the test of english as a foreign language (or toefl) evaluates the ability of anindividual, who is a non-native english speaker, to use an understand englishin an academic setting、 根据这个超级官方的定义，我们不难看出，托福考试就是一场对于我们在学术背景下的语言能力考试。

官方给的7分范文如下：

Many may say, and I agree, that today’s society has almost erased all its borders and soon will become limitless in what concerns traveling for both work and pleasure. Therefore, if this is to happen, then learning a new language is necessary.